I sent Cle her Rita/Hermione fic back after I'd given it a twice-over, and she wrote: He has made certain things sound exactly the way I wanted them to and made my sticky teenage fumblings read like a real sex scene.
*glow* Thanks, Cle!
It's a damn sexy story, BTW, if you like hot hot girl girl powerplay sex. Yeah, I'm going to pimp her fic :) so take a look here if you want.